"The Duel"



This felt like it needed a rewrite, like the thing about Ralph going on a picnic with a girl coming up and then not paying off even as a sub-subplot.  And especially I didn't think Jacques worked as a villain, or a reformed villain.  But the fencing was nice, so C.

The only note I have is that James Start appears as Frank for the first of five times and I have absolutely no idea which character that was.

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